Just finished going over all of the edits. I applied most of them all right. Some a little differently, like I had been talking about. And to be sure, I fixed all the head-hopping. That was paramount. It seemed hard at first, but I got the hang of it. So now, only when a hard scene break appears, does the POV change. And I got rid of some scene breaks, too. I'm telling you this is one well-written story.
ButI still have to rewrite the very beginning. Not the Prologue. That stands. But the start of Chapter One. Only about three paragraphs or so. Like I mentioned in a prior post, I have to do something about those other people waiting in the Gate area.
I guess they can't be there unless they're awaiting a stopover like Trent is doing. And that's why I can have him in there. But I have to write it. I'll do that today. Right now it's time for some shut-eye. But I feel good right now. The manuscript is better than ever. I mean it's so polished I'll have to read it with sunglasses from now on. Can't wait to send it back. I hope to do that this afternoon. But we'll see.
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