Will iconic images recorded in the grooves of an ancient vase unite the Holy Land or rip it further apart?

THE VASE

A novel by Mark M. DeRobertis

Muhsin Muhabi is a Palestinian potter, descended from a long line of potters. His business is run from the same shop owned by his ancestors since the day his forebears moved to Nazareth. The region's conflict saw the death of his oldest son, and rogue terrorists are in the process of recruiting his youngest in their plot to assassinate the Pope and Israeli prime minister.

Professor Hiram Weiss is an art historian at Nazareth’s Bethel University. He is also a Shin Bet operative on special assignment. With the help of fellow agent, Captain Benny Mathias, he plans to destroy the gang responsible for the death of his wife and only child. He puts a bomb in the ancient vase he takes on loan from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.

Mary Levin, the charming assistant to the director of Shin Bet, has lost a husband and most of her extended family to recurring wars and never-ending terrorism. She dedicates her life to the preservation of Israel, but to whom will she dedicate her heart? The brilliant professor from Bethel University? Or the gallant captain who now leads Kidon?

Harvey Holmes, the Sherlock of Haunted Houses, is a Hollywood TV host whose reality show just flopped. When a Lebanese restaurant owner requests his ghost-hunting services, he believes the opportunity will resurrect his career. All he has to do is exorcise the ghosts that are haunting the restaurant. It happens to be located right across the street from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.




Monday, August 9, 2010

Writing Tips and Advice I Like

I get all kinds of tips from other writer's blogs, and mostly they have been very good tips.

We've heard the same ones over and over again, like:

Don't use similes
Don't use adverbs
Don't use passive voice
Show don't tell

But here are ten others. I forget where I got them from, but it was probably from someone Nathan Bransford linked. Just letting you know I didn't make them up. But for this post and for this blog, I did take the liberty to shorten the explanation.

1. Write the sentence, not just the story
-this means that you have got to pay attention to each individual sentence, as opposed to the whole story. Make each sentence unique and special.

2. Pick a better verb
-we've all heard this one before. Use the best verb, and hopefully, you won't need an adverb. (Although I still say adverbs have their place.)

3. Kill the Cliché.
-if you want to be original, and you do want to be original.

4. Variety is the key.
-change your sentence structure and lengths, so they don't seem the same throughout your manuscript.

5. Explore sentences using dependent clauses
-this was a great tip, which I never heard before.

6. Use the landscape
-not only to describe your scene, but your characters and your action.

7. Smarten up your protagonist
-meaning the mc can give you a lot of information by knowing what's up.

8. Learn to write dialogue
-this of course is part of the craft.

9. Write in scenes
-don't skip to another scene before the one you're on is completed with a good break.

10. Torture your protagonist
-this is something Donald Maass stressed in his book on writing the breakout novel. TENSION on every page.

Compare those to George Orwell's Writing Advice:

1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
-Yeah, we got that one by now.

2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
-I agree, but there are exceptions, see rule no. 6.

3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
-I realized this is particularly true for the word, "the."

4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
-This has been drilled home by now, too.

5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
-good advice, especially when you write things about science, and in both of my first two novels, and my wip, I do.

6. Break any of these rules sooner than saying anything outright barbarous.
-there are always exceptions to every rule.

KEEP WRITING!!

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