Will iconic images recorded in the grooves of an ancient vase unite the Holy Land or rip it further apart?

THE VASE

A novel by Mark M. DeRobertis

Muhsin Muhabi is a Palestinian potter, descended from a long line of potters. His business is run from the same shop owned by his ancestors since the day his forebears moved to Nazareth. The region's conflict saw the death of his oldest son, and rogue terrorists are in the process of recruiting his youngest in their plot to assassinate the Pope and Israeli prime minister.

Professor Hiram Weiss is an art historian at Nazareth’s Bethel University. He is also a Shin Bet operative on special assignment. With the help of fellow agent, Captain Benny Mathias, he plans to destroy the gang responsible for the death of his wife and only child. He puts a bomb in the ancient vase he takes on loan from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.

Mary Levin, the charming assistant to the director of Shin Bet, has lost a husband and most of her extended family to recurring wars and never-ending terrorism. She dedicates her life to the preservation of Israel, but to whom will she dedicate her heart? The brilliant professor from Bethel University? Or the gallant captain who now leads Kidon?

Harvey Holmes, the Sherlock of Haunted Houses, is a Hollywood TV host whose reality show just flopped. When a Lebanese restaurant owner requests his ghost-hunting services, he believes the opportunity will resurrect his career. All he has to do is exorcise the ghosts that are haunting the restaurant. It happens to be located right across the street from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.




Monday, July 19, 2010

Moving right along

I call it half done...the first draft, anyway. Which means that my WIP is really only about a quarter done. Because even when you're done, you're only half done. Yeah, I would say that when the first draft is done, it's about half way through the process, and maybe not even that much.

But, OK, nothing gets done unless you get that first draft down, from beginning to the end. A novel's completed first draft is still something about which any writer can cheer. It's like I said before...it's getting all the pieces of a puzzle on the table, and after that you can fit them together as you like.

It's a great feeling, anyway. Even to have half of it in front of you.

Yeah, so how do I know it's half done. Like I mentioned before, I target my novels to be about 85,000 to 90,000 words and somewhere over 300 pages. Killer Eyes is now at 42,500 words and page 151.

My first novel, Killer of Killers was over 100,000 words at the completion of the first draft. But your manuscript always ends up less words for all the revising. You end up deleting a lot of unnecessary words here and there...sometimes whole sentences, and even sometimes whole paragraphs. That's the second half of the journey. I think it might even be the part I enjoy more. Well, I don't know. Both are fun. Oh, well, can't start thinking about that yet. I still have over 40,000 words to go. Sheesh, I don't like looking at it that way. Let me go back to the way I started this post.

Yeah, I'm half done...42,000 words down and on page 151. (Yeah, that sounds better.)

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