Will iconic images recorded in the grooves of an ancient vase unite the Holy Land or rip it further apart?

THE VASE

A novel by Mark M. DeRobertis

Muhsin Muhabi is a Palestinian potter, descended from a long line of potters. His business is run from the same shop owned by his ancestors since the day his forebears moved to Nazareth. The region's conflict saw the death of his oldest son, and rogue terrorists are in the process of recruiting his youngest in their plot to assassinate the Pope and Israeli prime minister.

Professor Hiram Weiss is an art historian at Nazareth’s Bethel University. He is also a Shin Bet operative on special assignment. With the help of fellow agent, Captain Benny Mathias, he plans to destroy the gang responsible for the death of his wife and only child. He puts a bomb in the ancient vase he takes on loan from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.

Mary Levin, the charming assistant to the director of Shin Bet, has lost a husband and most of her extended family to recurring wars and never-ending terrorism. She dedicates her life to the preservation of Israel, but to whom will she dedicate her heart? The brilliant professor from Bethel University? Or the gallant captain who now leads Kidon?

Harvey Holmes, the Sherlock of Haunted Houses, is a Hollywood TV host whose reality show just flopped. When a Lebanese restaurant owner requests his ghost-hunting services, he believes the opportunity will resurrect his career. All he has to do is exorcise the ghosts that are haunting the restaurant. It happens to be located right across the street from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.




Friday, June 25, 2010

Progress on Killer Eyes, part 2

On Chapter Six, and near 16,000 words. Of course it's a first draft. I remember my first draft of Killer of Killers surpassed 100,000 words, but after multiple passes of revisions, it ended up at 89,000. So you never know how much stays and how much goes until you get past the major revisions stage.

Right now, Trent is back in Japan, revisiting the Tokyo Dojo. His Japanese sweetheart has been kidnapped along with her grandfather, Trent's mentor, and he is there seeking clues. But while he's there, we see flashbacks of his past experiences. He did spend 20 years of his life there, after all and so reflections of those times are inevitable as he goes back for the first time.

I love sequels. So much of Trent's background is revealed. It's a great time to learn more about your MC. Even stuff you (the author/creator) didn't know. Like I didn't know that when he reached the Judan level of black belt, the other Judans put him through..."The Ordeal"...I din't even know what that was at first. But now I do.

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