So Just How Does One Review Edits?

While I'm going over this second round of edits, I decided to do it differently this time. Instead of reading through it word by word like I did the first round of edits, I'll review all editorial changes first, and at the same time review the changes I had made on the last version to see if they were incorporated. And after that, then I will go back and read it through word by word to make sure it reads smoothly, and also to make sure nothing was missed, like typos or punctuation. And, as I've learned repeatedly, I will most likely find better ways to write parts of it here and there. Penumbra has already told me that they want this round to be the last round, and that means the version I send back will most likely be the version published. So it's now or never. Here goes...