Will iconic images recorded in the grooves of an ancient vase unite the Holy Land or rip it further apart?

THE VASE

A novel by Mark M. DeRobertis

Muhsin Muhabi is a Palestinian potter, descended from a long line of potters. His business is run from the same shop owned by his ancestors since the day his forebears moved to Nazareth. The region's conflict saw the death of his oldest son, and rogue terrorists are in the process of recruiting his youngest in their plot to assassinate the Pope and Israeli prime minister.

Professor Hiram Weiss is an art historian at Nazareth’s Bethel University. He is also a Shin Bet operative on special assignment. With the help of fellow agent, Captain Benny Mathias, he plans to destroy the gang responsible for the death of his wife and only child. He puts a bomb in the ancient vase he takes on loan from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.

Mary Levin, the charming assistant to the director of Shin Bet, has lost a husband and most of her extended family to recurring wars and never-ending terrorism. She dedicates her life to the preservation of Israel, but to whom will she dedicate her heart? The brilliant professor from Bethel University? Or the gallant captain who now leads Kidon?

Harvey Holmes, the Sherlock of Haunted Houses, is a Hollywood TV host whose reality show just flopped. When a Lebanese restaurant owner requests his ghost-hunting services, he believes the opportunity will resurrect his career. All he has to do is exorcise the ghosts that are haunting the restaurant. It happens to be located right across the street from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.




Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Still One More Time

So I checked over the edits again last night for The Vase, and I found myself editing the edits! But I wasn't really surprised. It's happened before, after all. My intention was to go over the edits a second time and then send it to Penumbra today. But I will wait. I want to go over them still one more time.

It's not like I'm reading every word throughout the entire manuscript like I did when I went over the edited version the first time. That would take me another week. No, the second time and now the third time I'm just going over the changes. And each time I do, I make better changes.

So why not one more time? Undoubtedly,  I"ll find some places I can improve. And if I don't, then that's the assurance I'll need that it's ready to send. And then, who  knows, they may make more edits, and send it back to me, and I'll start all over again. We'll see.
Posted by at
Labels: , , , ,

No comments:

Post a Comment

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)