Will iconic images recorded in the grooves of an ancient vase unite the Holy Land or rip it further apart?

THE VASE

A novel by Mark M. DeRobertis

Muhsin Muhabi is a Palestinian potter, descended from a long line of potters. His business is run from the same shop owned by his ancestors since the day his forebears moved to Nazareth. The region's conflict saw the death of his oldest son, and rogue terrorists are in the process of recruiting his youngest in their plot to assassinate the Pope and Israeli prime minister.

Professor Hiram Weiss is an art historian at Nazareth’s Bethel University. He is also a Shin Bet operative on special assignment. With the help of fellow agent, Captain Benny Mathias, he plans to destroy the gang responsible for the death of his wife and only child. He puts a bomb in the ancient vase he takes on loan from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.

Mary Levin, the charming assistant to the director of Shin Bet, has lost a husband and most of her extended family to recurring wars and never-ending terrorism. She dedicates her life to the preservation of Israel, but to whom will she dedicate her heart? The brilliant professor from Bethel University? Or the gallant captain who now leads Kidon?

Harvey Holmes, the Sherlock of Haunted Houses, is a Hollywood TV host whose reality show just flopped. When a Lebanese restaurant owner requests his ghost-hunting services, he believes the opportunity will resurrect his career. All he has to do is exorcise the ghosts that are haunting the restaurant. It happens to be located right across the street from Muhsin’s Pottery Shop.




Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Two Novels, Two Great Stories

KILLER OF KILLERS is getting published next month. THE VASE will get published too, but not next month. I can't believe it's taking this long for THE VASE to land a publisher. It had received three offers in my first round of submissions. That actually carried over into another offer. And then the second round of submissions resulted in three requests for fulls.

But that was five months ago. Okay, so you never know how long it will take. The one day submission to Melange that landed the contract for KILLER OF KILLERS must have been the exception to the rule of how slow the process really is.

I don't know how much longer I will wait until I submit THE VASE to Melange, also. We'll see. I'm still perfecting it. Even today I made the prose better in a lot of places. I guess that's what I'll keep doing. I hate it when I submit something and then decide that it could have been written better, even in one little place.

That happened when I sent my final draft of KILLER OF KILLERS to the publisher. I found one little spot that could have been better. I'm hoping to correct if when I get the ARC. So don't ever get complacent. Not when it comes to writing a novel.

Like I've said with art and music: a drawing, a painting, a song or a lyric can be a finished work at some point. But a novel? Only when it's in print. And that means when it's published. And that is the biggest difference between a novelist and a composer, artist, lyricist, etc.

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