Just like I knew I would, I made a lot of improvements to my improvements on The Vase. It probably has been revised as much as Killer of Killers by now. Except KOK didn't have five different editors work on it. The Vase has by now. And even then, there's always more you can do.
So, one more time, again, I'll go over that manuscript. Mostly I'll be focusing on one particular part. It's a part that was originally a flashback. One of the characters is telling another character what happened, and I originally made it into a flashback after he began talking. But my latest editor doesn't want it to be a flashback, so that part needs a little more work. It's almost there. I think this last time should do it.
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